My most recent blog made mention of the Said Poets Society and their visit to my school. I can’t thank them enough for their efforts in engaging with the students and providing them with a voice. I’ve been teaching for over 11 years now and I am still surprised by what students can produce; I think if that surprise ever dissipates then I will leave the profession.
Anyway, one of the slides the Said Poets showed my students suggested that they should try to identify 2 fast parts and 2 slow parts, 2 soft points and 2 loud points, as well as 2 ‘killer lines’ as part of their editing process.
Below are some of the killer lines from my students and, without a doubt, one of the strongest pieces of poetry I have ever had the pleasure of seeing performed.
“Was I just a puppet to be exploited? A puppy just for your enjoyment?”
“Played a man’s heart like a baby with a rattle;
Shaking it, loving it, breaking it.”
“The claws of death came and pulled them under.”
“These kids are like lambs ready for the slaughter…”
“Stole her mother from her
And never gave her back.”
“The joy recently brought by the faded ‘positive’ double line
Was washed away with crimson blood, staining her sheets.”
“You wait, you board, you wait, you exit, you wait, rinse, repeat, start over, keep waiting for the next destination.”
Wrote of trees and their “emerald umbrellas”.
“The ominous, dark sky is black ink spilt
on the parchment of the heavens,
a purpling bruise on the skin of the universe.”
“The earth bares scars, pits and puddles,
healed by the sun, a shy child peeking out
from its mother’s skirt.”
“… I smiled
until we got Home and I dropped the facade as soon as you were asleep”
And finally, the entire poem by Bec Weldon (whose permission I asked before publishing this and who is, justifiably, proud of her work:
5 Ways to Cure the World
It’s become a sentimental cliché of sort,
That’s through wars we’ve fought and thoughts we’ve thought
That when asked how we can change, we resort,
To the same tired answers
World Peace, Equality,
These words, to me, hold little meaning
Through their overuse in every situation
Let me change that, every wrong situation,
A petty drunken fight and the media calls for peace on the streets,
Yet we seldom hear of the thousands slain in cold blood over political unease,
A mother cannot afford to feed her starving child but we hear tales of celebrities running wild,
Men read carefully constructed speeches from carefully decorated podiums,
Calling for society to change,
And it should, though are their intentions so equally directed,
When victims suffer and the guilty are protected
From a woman’s view I see no more than political babble
And bullshit to gain the affections of the gullible.
With this in mind, I disregard the changes that old men sitting at circular tables have decided we need to make,
Through their fondness for the good old days, when their own actions are far too late
Instead turning to my attention to what I believe,
As a young person who will live in this world after such men have passed,
Regardless of whether their worlds brought change,
Or whether peace has been achieved at last,
And so I give you my own list,
Of changes I believe we missed
I must insist, that this pessimistic approach to curing the world,
Should be dismissed.
5 ways to cure the world.
Number 1- Acceptance
I’m not talking about equality, that’s out of the question
When at every mention, the privileged groan in contemption
I’m not just targeting race, gender, sexuality, or financial splendour
I’m talking about loving thy neighbour like a God told us we should
Accepting that your colour, genitals and religion doesn’t determine whether you’re bad or good
Should your kids grow up in a world where we clutch our purse, when a coloured man walks past us, or threaten godly curses onto girls who love girls or men who choose guys
Shall a transgender teen be beaten to death, Muslims despised or refugees oppressed,
When you look into a child’s eyes, would you rather see unconditional love or heartless despise?
Fuck the other 4, this is my solution, acceptance, is not an outdated institution.
Can I ask a question, please, I just want to know,
Does having a cock mean that you can shame? Or grab ass and pass it off as a
Does having a vagina mean we just have to put up with it, does it make us weak or
Does having a job make you better, than those who don’t?
Does the size of your bank account determine your worth?
Does the colour of your skin determine your criminal record?
No, no, no, no and no
For hours we can listen to scripted phrases,
Read by celebrities,
Written by employees on minimum wages,
About how we can change,
Here buy a t-shirt, a quote about peace,
Thank you for supporting the cause
Acceptance isn’t agreeing to something someone said one time
Or opening a door for a Asian person and thinking ’Wow I’m so ethnically concerned’
Acceptance is recognition of women and theirs rights
Recognising that no one should live in poverty, without a place to stay the night
Understanding that people might be attracted to someone of the same gender
Or want to identify as something other than what they’ve been told they should be
People wanting to believe in their gods
People working the system against all odds
Us accepting that they are different and loving them even so.
Through depression, desperation, revolution, recession
It’s not about putting people onto pedestals
Or making less fortunate workers polish them for minimum wage
It’s about flattening the grounds, removing the signs prohibiting change
Understanding that though there may never be equality between race, rank or gender
We should treat all as family, with respect as a friend
Or at least acknowledge their right to their earth
Because let’s face it, we all were no different at birth
And so I’ve completed my list, that of just one idea
Acceptance, of all, for all, now and here.